Hi Jim,

I just finished reading Soul Siphon and really liked your character, Mary. As I kept reading, she started talking about historical events that she was involved in, namely the Jack the Ripper killings. I’m not a history buff, so I decided to google the Whitechapel killings to get a little context.

To my surprise, you took Mary directly from the history books! I was really shocked to find out that she was an actual living person. As a writer, I’m curious how you were able to write her. You don’t know what she was like when she was alive, so how can you hope to portray her correctly? Not only that, don’t you think her descendants would object to you using her in your book, especially given some of the things she does?

I’m not trying to accuse you of anything, I’m just wondering as I find her usage intersting and potentially something I’d like to do.

Thanks,
Jeanette


Hi Jeannette,

No attack implied.

So let’s tackle your questions one at a time…

As a writer, I’m curious how you were able to write her. You don’t know what she was like when she was alive, so how can you hope to portray her correctly?

A very good question. The unfortunate answer is that I can’t. My character may be WAY off on what Mary was really like. So where did my approximation come from?
Well what do we know about Mary?
– She was Irish.
– She went by the nickname ‘Black Mary’ for starting brawls.
– She was known for getting heavily intoxicated and singing Irish songs… very loudly.
– She worked at a brothel.

So that’s all we know. So I took that and added in a level of frustration, sadness, and a high level of bitterness not only from being murdered, but (SPOILER ALERT) not being able to hunt down and reap vengeance on the man responsible. (/SPOILER)

So really that’s basically all I had to work with, if you checked out her history, you saw that that information on her is very limited. Some historians even dispute her hair color. So when you don’t have much to work with, you do your best to fill in the blanks where ever you can. That’s where the frustration, bitterness, and sadness came in.

Simply put, you do the best you can with what little you have to work with. Take what situational information you have the person, find out as much as you can about what they’ve done, how their lives were, and how they reacted to people, and build off of that.

Not only that, don’t you think her descendants would object to you using her in your book, especially given some of the things she does?

I worry about that every time I write a historical character into my stories. However we have no definitive confirmation of any descendants in the case of Mary. Some people have come forward claiming to be a granddaughter, great-niece, etc. None have been confirmed, and too often many are trying to sell books…

Honestly, if we had confirmation of someone being related to her or one of the other historical characters that I’d written about in the past, I’d absolutely contact them first. Not only to ask permission to use their names and identities, but also for some information on their ancestor. It’s courtesy and it makes sense.

So I hope that helps, this is how I create a character from a historical person where we have limited information about them.

Readers, do you have another method? Have you written about a Historical person? How do you tackle the hurdles mentioned above?




Readers,

Do you have a question about writing, publishing, my stories, etc? Please feel free to post a comment or email me.
jimthewritingwizard@gmail.com
I’ll use those comments to select my next blog post.

I have been writing for several years, have 4 published works, experience with publishing and independent work, so I can hopefully be of assistance.
Please note, I only do one of these a day and will do my best to respond to everyone, but it may take some time.

Also, feel free to check out my works of Fantasy and Historical Fiction, Available on Amazon and where ever books are sold. See the link below:

http://www.amazon.com/James-Harrington/e/B00P7FBXTU

Thanks friends!
Catch you on the flip side!

-Jim

6 Comments on “Writing History?

  1. I wonder if the Lincoln family got contacted for Abraham Lincoln, Vampire Slayer… or if the Doctor Who people got in touch with Queen Elizabeth before they wrote about Queen Victoria and the werewolf? I seem to recall Pride and Prejudice and Zombies got the okay, but ?

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  2. I don’t tend to hunt down descendents, but so far the only historical people I’ve written are peripheral characters, and outside of one or two that possess a certain level of historical notoriety already, I’ve not written anything negative about any of them. I also try to make it clear in an author note what research I’ve done and what educated guesses I’ve made. And there’s always that legal disclaimer that the characters are invented by the author.

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  3. I am in the process of turning my family history into a novel, and I would agree with Jim’s approach. You have to start with what you know, but once you start writing, you realise there is so much you don’t know and many gaps to fill. By making an educated guess into what ‘could’ have happened, you can start to develop the story, but in my case over half the story line is probably pure fiction.

    I have worried about offending descendants, who are not part of the family (and there are probably too many to track down), but to avoid that I have changed the names and put a disclaimer at the front of the books to say all characterisation is fictitious (which it is. As you say, how can you possibly know characters who died before anyone alive today was born?). I have also checked that you can’t defame the dead. I hope that will be enough, and if any descendants do link themselves to the characters, I hope they’d be interested above than anything else.

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    • Well said, I always have this disclaimer at the front of my books: “This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events and incidents are either the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual living persons is purely coincidental.”
      Highly recommend it for any fictional work.

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