by Jim
I wanted to ask you about chapters. I’m heavily into the re-write of mine. I’ve been putting a lot more detail which means some of my chapters have become a lot bigger. In your view what’s the maximum word count for a chapter? Is it okay to have a 3k or even 5k one if it works?
Hi Eric,
There really is no right or wrong answer here. My chapters often range from 1100 to 6700 words. As long as you’re in the same place, in the same character’s perspective, there is no reason to end a chapter. Chapter breaks for me are most appropriate for the passage of time (say a few minutes/hours), during a major perspective change (a character POV who isn’t in the same vicinity), or a change of scenery. Even just walking into another room can justify a chapter change.
Well say I’m writing a story that is completely linear, stays with one character’s perspective, and remains in the same room the entire time?
Sigh… okay, in this increasingly hypothetical situation, I’d say that a chapter break would need to happen when the character’s attention is drawn to something new or… something changes in the room.
As I said above, there is no exact science. How or when you decide to end a chapter will be dictated more by your own style of writing and inclination than it will any written rule or any advice I could give you. I try to look at a chapter as its own individual thought, problem, or scene.
There are many out there who would say that the length of a chapter should be more decided by the length of a book. (a 55,000 word book should have 5,000 word chapters), in other words, split up the book into 10 chapters, each one containing a tenth of the total word count. I don’t subscribe to this as I find it far too rigid.
In the end, it’s really up to you. If you feel like a chapter is starting to drone on, then find a place where the attention is broken or the scene changes in someway and insert a chapter break. It’s more of a judgement call than anything else.
So, sorry that I can’t give you a definitive answer, but honestly that’s because there isn’t really one. I do hope that this helps in some way.
Readers, what do you think? Are there certain chapter structures that you live by when writing? Let Eric know in the comments .
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I like for my chapters to have a point of some kind. Either a plot point, character growth, movement toward a goal… something that defines it. When that point is achieved, the chapter ends. Every once in a while its good for a chapter to end on a major reveal, or as a cliffhanger, but the point is for it to be a complete thought that drives the story.
Easy in theory…
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Here’s one from the critic’s perspective. It really does depend on the story flow. I’ve seen chapters that are too short and could have been combined with the next chapter. I’ve also seen chapters that should have been split up, especially if the chapter went back and forth between two unconnected events. (Connected events is a different story.) And you have to remember your audience and how long a chapter you think they’d be willing to put up with. It’s why young reader books tend to have shorter chapters than ones meant for teen or grown-up readers.
I say when you’re done try to read through it from the mindset of your intended audience and see if the chapter breaks make sense. With luck they don’t want to put the book down until their done, but everyone has lives and can’t always do that.I do my book reviews a chapter at a time once a week in part because of my limited time. How your story flows between chapters is a huge part of deciding when to end a chapter and start the next one.
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